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It's not too bad once it gets going. My main complaint is that it takes so long to get going. After that first bell toll, there's no suspense. Just dead space. I do, however, like the progression of the song. Bell (add), bell (add a little more), and so on. It's really groovin' around the 2 minute mark, but up to that point, it's pretty dull. 6/10, 3/5
Author's Response:
sorry about the delay. it's supposed to have an apocalyptic theme to it, that's why it took so long to kick in. I'll see what I can do to improve it and make it more interesting.
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I have almost no criticisms about the opening half of the song. It's a very rich sounding piano, and the effects you layered over it blended very well. Adding the strings (and did I hear brass?) worked great. Also, I like the depth of the percussion. It's a nice break from the standard hi-hat/snare/heavy kick combo, and it fits with the feel of the song quite nicely. Finally, just wanted to say that the divebomb hit at 0:38 sounded really cool.
Now, my biggest complaint is about your choice of lead starting at 01:55. Considering how mellow the song has been up to this point, it's too aggressive to be effective. The amount of detune on it didn't help much either, considering how high the notes are. I would say turn down the electro filtering on it and bump it down an octave.
Your style has improved a helluva lot since this song, but I still think it's a great piece. It's nice and mellow without being too weak. Keep at it!
4/5, 7/10
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If you're going for high energy, you've nailed it. What really stands out to me is the contrast between the buildup at 0:42 and the impact at 01:06. I definitely wasn't expecting such a hard hit after such a light snare/kick combo, and it was really intense (in a good way). Also, the echoed melody at the beginning got my head bobbing right off the bat.
Criticism: After such a heavy impact at 01:06, I feel like the rest of the song didn't quite live up to it. From 01:06 to 01:39, it just feels very plain compared to the earlier parts. 01:39 was a nice transition to the end (with a good "unwinding" feel to it), but it also felt a bit too empty.
A lot of users (myself included) submit finished products that aren't half as good as this WIP, so my hat goes off to you, good sir. I can't wait to hear the finished version! 8/10, 4/5
Author's Response:
Thank you VERY much for your helpful review! when i finish this track, i will make sure to let you know! thank you so much!
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I can't believe this song hasn't gotten more recognition. I love the turntables. Too often, songs incorporating them go overboard with it and end up spoiling the feel. Here, they pick up the beat without changing the mindset of the song. Also, the samples at the beginning are a perfect way to set things in motion. The ambient radio static is the cherry on top. 5/5 10/10
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Catchy melody, and I really like the change-up around 1:55. But, I feel like it doesn't pack enough of a punch. Even if you're going for a lighter feel, I think you need some lower frequency instrumentation. Particularly the kick. It's obviously there, but it's not "thumping" like it should. Overall though, great job on this one. 4/5, 7/10
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, I can't believe I used to make music like this and called it trance :P. I agree with you on pretty much everything there but I have learned a lot since I made this song.
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Yo dawg, yo be hittin dem phatt beetz mad liek yo do, yo.
But seriously, I know it's old and your style has matured quite a bit. Still, the fact that your dated stuff is of this caliber speaks volumes about your musicianship. Bravo. 5/5 10/10
Author's Response:
Omg this song is so crazy I haven't listened to it in forever, I know I could not make this again if I tried :D.
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I feel my troubles melting away into sunshine. It has a delicious blend of the instruments you usually incorporate in your hardcore trance songs. Yeah, I'm pretty sure that means you have mastered your craft. Congratulations, you just made my day.
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This is one of the most beautiful pieces I've heard on Newgrounds. The layers, the tempo changes, the piano, it all comes together so perfectly. This is an absolute masterpiece. 10/10 easy
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You have more downloads than listens on this song. Always love your unique mixtures of sounds. They come together in such a nice way every single time.
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Kinda makes my head spin, but in a good way. Very weird, almost hypnotic. The only criticism I have is that it's just a little repetitive at times. The parts are cool, but they're pretty high, so I'd be careful about playing them too much. Other than that, it's wicked.
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